Evokes pictures not all of them nice. Poetry should make you think sometimes. This does that job. Keep them coming.

Deaths true love.

I'm going to enjoy this. I can already see these characters in my minds eye.

Thanks. Currently editing part 5.

Thank you so much.

Beautiful

Wow thought provoking and spoken from the heart. There are many kinds of slavery and none of it good. Its as old as human kind itself. So is the corruption of the powerful towards the vulnerable. I know

So true.

Much needed post. The work I am posting on Steemit is quite raw. But a book I wrote many years ago was edited that many times I lost count. I was never satisfied. Knowing when to stop can be a problem

Lovely old git. Can't wait to see what he gets up to next.

Thank you its nice to know I'm a hit!

Great advice. I always have a picture in my mind of what my characters look like. But perhaps its not what others see. Also names give a suggestion. I like to show their weakness, and use it for later.

Thank you very much. I am enjoying writing these stories. Tales of The Scribe will have many parts if I can keep my inspiration going.

Love it. What happens next at the Green Lantern?

Beautiful.

Loved this. Just the kind of fiction I enjoy. But I'll have to go back to the beginning!

Keep at it. Sometimes stories start from the middle or the end and work their way back then forward again. It takes time to craft everything you have, but keep it all, don't throw it away. Even the small

Thanks any advice is appreciated.

Very enjoyable. Good bed time reading. Looking forward to next chapters.

Again fabulous photos. There is something quite delicate, sensual and erotic about these flowers.