Thanks! It's okay tho, peakd is like the wild west.

Cheers dude!

The commenting initiative is perhaps not as dire as it seems - I commented on three before I posted my last one. X

Oh I love this. Has such a sense of movement in that progression through the different people and such big stories in such small lines. Poignant.

Really like the first stanza of this, super effective. Could be the whole poem on its own. The rest I find rather spoon-feeds the message and less relatable. I'm probably not the intended audience though,

Love the title!

😊

Thanks for the encouragement!

Fully agree with your message here. I find rhyming poems can tend to get a bit predictable and I used to play a little game sitting at the back of an open mic night trying to see if I could guess the next

Here's mine... A tough prompt not to fall into cliches with. Dunno if I managed it. Hope so.

Love how there's a whole story in those three tiny lines.

Wow!

Cool - love the way you make something out of something else.

Love learning concepts from other cultures, thanks!

No reason why you can't join in part way. I only dip in and out myself.

Thanks!

Thanks Melon! 😊

Love these.

AI made my lady a mutant!

Thanks for sharing your experiences and thoughts on this. I have found it more helpful to see depressing thoughts simply as depressing thoughts rather than "irrational" ones myself, as our automatic