I love your central idea you sending across that there is more room for improvement. thanks for the advice

awesome piece. I love how you played around words to send your message across

ohk bruv

hmmmm we all need to pause and restart our life's to make this world a better place to live in.

"All successful people sometimes have to do things they don't like but need to do, so that one day they can earn the right to do what they like" this is perfectly correct because sometimes you

such an awesome piece. am touched with these words 'For it is you, my Eurydice, who pulled me to life, to sound and fury.' you became my judge and jury to determine my fate but faith aint straight. wish

I really love your piece.... we need not to blame our government for the choices we make. when you want to heal a sick tree you don't just cut off the branches, you start from the root. this we cant

yeah in Ghana our parents have made it seem like a taboo to talk or discuss our relationships and its hunting and causing emotional and psychological effects in the life's of we the youth. I think is time

God bless you guys for the love you shown those kids and the smiles you placed on their faces.....keep the good work up......stay bless!

like your ending sentence 'be well on your own, try to keep your love ones as good' hypocrisy looks crunchy and being real is the best you can ever have. congrats and welcome to the amazing community jareen61.

tnx

tnx bruv

yh

touched

pleasure is all mine

thanks snr

thanks bro

thanks

thanks bro

thanks bro