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Pea Darling
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February 28, 2024
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2025-07-01 23:59
RE: No really, he said that...
thank you
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2025-06-25 12:13
RE: No really, he said that...
thank you so much
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2025-06-25 01:11
RE: Alice's words to Adam; Our Song.
Nice poem. I wonder how it would read with only capitals for the first word in the sentence, what sort of flow it would have.
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2025-06-25 01:08
RE: WHO A MAN IS
May I make a suggestion that you start a new line when you capitalise a new word as this can cause gramatical confusion
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2025-06-18 23:59
RE: Let me light the candles
Love the way you structured this. You could even turn the sentences into stanzas
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2025-06-18 23:57
RE: Thrive
Great positive message and image.
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2025-04-30 22:43
RE: Puppets and Villains
Really like how the imagery you use reflects the weight of what the character at the centre of the poem feels.
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2025-04-30 22:36
RE: Us All
There's a really great Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds "Death is not the end". I love the finality and inevitable ending you poem has.
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2025-04-15 23:41
RE: In My Soul-Meets.
Love the Lana del Ray song. If you find it difficult to proof your own work give it to a friend to read. I'm terrible at this. All that said I loved the poem
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2025-04-15 23:35
RE: The Light We Overlook
I really like your structure and how you break it down at the end.
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2025-03-10 22:31
RE: Life is not perfect
I love the way you lay out your poem it matches the river you describe in the beginning.
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2025-03-10 22:28
RE: You know
This poem has a really great flow between lines. Glad you didn't use rhyme to create that.
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2025-03-03 04:55
RE: Winter Remains ~ Original Haiku
I think that's the first time I've seen a semi colon in a haiku. Loved it.
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2025-03-03 04:52
RE: 'A Short Honeymoon in Auvergne '
I do like the thwarted romance of it all and I love that you didn't resort to rhyme, the piece has a rhythm and a flow of it's own.
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2025-01-30 00:08
RE: "Bronc's War"
Love the end rhyme in the stanzas and that you so casually broke it in one of the. Great images
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2025-01-30 00:05
RE: 10 Days To Change
I really lie you rhyme scheme it helps give the poem a sense of flow.
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2025-01-05 01:25
RE: We are at the end of a year
this might be a bit strange but I really enjoyed your use of grammar in the poem.
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2025-01-05 01:23
RE: Piano...
I like the poetic use of prose. You have created a vivid image.
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2024-12-19 23:21
RE: startled of course
I really like the shape of the poem on the page. The bottom looks like a chalice
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2024-12-19 23:18
RE: It is possible that my mental rhythm
Nice use of mirror imagery, Nicely structured stanzas . Really crisp images.
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