thank you!

Thank you=)

*To which he gazed upon, with awestruck eyes, *And gave unto you the first decree, a song by four beatles, let it be. Awesome idea good sir, may the glory continue ~

I'd be honored, I shall indulge when I can!

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I stumbled upon your work while looking at other people's sestinas. I really like how you put the end words together, its not easy! Curious on your thoughts on mine

Humbly appreciated good sir! Thank you for the glorious feedback=)

I'm a bit confused on the picture's relevance to the poem lol

Thank you good sir!

A very thoughtful poem, I think it grows more powerful as it progresses. That being said, the first line I think could be made stronger to provide precedence for the final two lines. Perhaps even tie in

I love how you tie the title in at the end. One line that possibly confused me was "calmly controlled the situation." Do you mean; "Calm... controlled the situation," ??? Curious on

I enjoy your free verse, and your flow of thoughts and emotions. For me the ending can be stronger though, "I think need a help" could be altered to provide a more powerful ending. "Please...

I like the ending refrain, it flows with passion. I like that you write in a lyrical sense, I enjoy that style as well. I think you may enjoy this=)

This is very well put together and quite inspiring! Well done! I would love your feedback on one of my recent poems

I like where you're going with this, I feel it could be made stronger with some grammar and punctuation! Instead of running thoughts, add dramatic pause with more commas and periods! Separate some lines

I like the passion again, a few thoughts on phrasing which catch my eye... Instead of "Time flies in every laughter and Tears," perhaps "Time flies in every laughter, and every tear."

The Truth About Jane?

Thank you, alas, she is the daughter of one of my characters in the book I am writing=)

I usually am not a fan of poems that rhyme, but I liked the flow you had here. I can definitely see the song essence in it, well done! I would love some feedback on my poem!

I enjoyed your poem, however I felt the rhyming takes away from it. At least from my perspective! The end rhymes felt forced, and I feel if you broke the rhyme scheme your thoughts would flow stronger.