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@sodeeyum

Sorry about that error Is it cool if I edit it?

The raw emotions drip through the words you've used and they land exactly where I think you want them to Nice work mate

Not even swiftness and speed can aid on this road, but steadiness and readiness shall prevail This stands out for me. Very true words Thanks for sharing this

Thank you so much for the rewards I'll surely do more than just sticking around ❤️

Then you've done exactly that That's amazing

Wonderful work! Feel, love and hug yourself because you deserve to ❤️

I also have insomnia and I also use the hours of the night for my writing. I feel a kindred spirit in your writing Good work, friend, and I wish you more rest at night

It seems like there is always something to be done and no time to just sit back and enjoy the passing of time

Much thanks 🙇🏾‍♂️

Thanks friend 🙇🏾‍♂️

You're right. Thanks for the kind words 🙏🏾

It's easy to rhyme, but to rhyme and still maintain your poem's central thread without any "mundane" disruption takes perfection And you've done just that. Wunderbar!

Now I'm inspired by your clear descriptions of the night air This is such a lovely poem

Thank you very much for your suggestions 🙏🏾

Congrats to all the winners I'm new here and I hope to be mentioned on a post like this someday *wink wink

What events or styles would you suggest?

This sounds lovely and sad at the same time Is that the theme you were trying to convey?

You've painted the sky in your poem. Wonderful!