Thank you so much for your comment. Yes, we are a collection of memories. This plane is where we decide how to be.

Thank you so much for your comment. Yes when we see then we've seen. Time is an illusion. I realise that.

in the moment I thought it was about time and it's seven days since I wrote it. Yes the nightmare image is defiantly in there. The multiverse is a whole new set of nightmares, though...

perhaps: continuum 'a continuous sequence in which adjacent elements are not perceptibly different from each other, but the extremes are quite distinct.'

Hi todayslight, thank you for your comment. I try and write from where I am emotionally. I chose to use the haiku, tanka format because that is a little tricky and aids brevity (which is something I am

Some thoughts on your post, and thank you There's a study that concluded that only 20% of people have an inner monologue. Something you describe in your poem (which I very much enjoyed). 'good poetry can

I logged in this morning and your piece is just what I needed to read. Thank you. "I'm alive and without any major medical problems." "I have a roof over my head and enough to eat."

It's real - it's by John McKenna. Read about them here:

Stuart - thank you so much for your comment. Three haiku and a couplet. My attempt at brevity.

Hi Mell79 and thanks for your comment. Yes it's a bit like hanging or ticking like a clock? It's two tanka verses. I used that structure to help with the brevity of the theme which I think is ending/beginning.

Thanks for your comment. It's a play on the sestina - usually there's six interlocking stanzas, the sixth being an envoi. Each end word from the final line rotates. The number 6 has some connotations I

That's a nice thought. I'd like that too. There's real and passionate. Your writing shows that. I think facing or refacing problems help us come to terms with them. Writing is a way to do that.

Another excellent piece. I really enjoy how you're expressing your thoughts here. Nice half rhymes with assonance: 'The roses you see to me show forth thorns, What feeling is needed to achieve my turns.'

Thankyou dbooster for your efforts in this community. It's great to read quality poems and share my work. Although I have no idea where I can find, spend, donate my SPI? Hope everyone has a great week

As a father of a 6 year old this line holds true: 'To hide my face as you poison our children.' Not on my watch. Thank you.

Very much enjoyed reading this poem. Nice play on words here 'One restless dawn, unable to suppress the itch of wanderlust, with a heavy door left ajar semi-deliberately, and a new light teasing in The

I very much enjoyed the sentiment here; 'When one understands that everything is something so innate, And that we will all get there sooner or later, We leave a little aside that fear that we have, And

I very much enjoyed reading this it chugs along at a nice pace. Quatrains are set out really well lots of nice poetic devices 'Unity is virtue to the hearts that accept, Below lives division at a much

Apologies for my translation

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