Hi weetree, she has always put on good show. Have added a couple new and got rid of couple. Hope to see you in chat soon. Followed ya back. Thanks.

Well written, would love to share this on my radio network Prepper Broadcasting, a network devoted to self reliance and independence... with credit of course. Either way I like your work, and you've got

Thank you bashadow, wish I had more time to write. They will come but slowly, hoping to have at least one new each week.

Nice and well written, like your control over the descriptive, no wasted words. Thanks

Thank you abigail-dantes, While writing is not new to me fiction is. It's comforting to find so many here, the different styles and techniques. I hope to gleam from those such as yourself to help me form

I spent more time in thought's related and generated by the story itself! Thanks

I'm new here to steemit, looking for a place to really practice what I love, writing fiction and learning from the critiques that may follow. Awesome to find this at the top under fiction while searching

Hello sversus, I would not consider myself professional. I have had 1 book published Preppers Survival Navigation but want to write fiction. This short is a spin off from the book I'm working on. Thanks