I really enjoyed your poem. I liked the tone in general, but above all I was struck by the strength of the second stanza, the image of the mouth full of rags. !PIZZA
I really enjoyed your poem. I liked the tone in general, but above all I was struck by the strength of the second stanza, the image of the mouth full of rags. !PIZZA
RE: Conflict resolution - a poem written for The Dirty Thirty Challenge