This poem is amazing. My boyfriend (whom I sent this poem) totally agrees with some of the sentiments you have expressed - the friendzone part. This part especially: "She'll be my friend
Hopefully that won't end" - Even though people might fall apart in the romantic sense, they should never ever stop being friends because of that.

I have also recently written a poem: https://steemit.com/poetry/@wordsmith01/poem-freedom - do check it out if you get a chance.

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