Thank you so much! It means a lot (: Angry poetry is definitely one of the best. Same with misery, but misery gets old I suppose. The highest of emotions will always create the greatest poems. (: I could

Thank you so much!(: it means alot. Writing is magic in that way (: those of us who are lucky enough to find piece in pen and paper have a pretty decent advantage on the rest of the population if you ask

This is such an uplifting piece it gave me goosebumps. The power of perception is everything. "The food for thoughts we eat soon dirty the dish." I love that. That's why eliminating toxic people

I would absolutely love to read it! Do you use discord?

It's funny, when I go back and read my old poetry it tends to be when I'm in the exact same situation as before. It's strange but maybe it's because I only turn to poetry and writing when I'm lost in darkness.

Thank you I appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment(:

Thank you(:

I can definitely understand that. I look alot like my grandma and I can't stand her... So I can hardly look at myself when my hair is her color. Funny how that works. As I get older I seem to look more

Aww you're awesome thank you! I guess I weigh professional poets as people who know everything about every rhyme scheme and structure out there. I just sort of write with a rythm and hope I find the right

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment ((: It makes my day that I could write something capable of reaching someones emotions. I find the best time to write is during times of extreme

Thank you haha it's funny I made a video of me singing that line I did some cringe worthy claw gesture and ruined the whole thing 😂 I wanna throw up everytime I watch it.

Aww how lucky she is to have a poet for a husband (: I loved it. I'm sure it sounds absolutely captivating in your native tongue. Even translated, without rhyme its a beautiful piece. Fiery bed of infinite

Untalented my ass! This is absolutely breathtaking and I mean that literally. The sensual undertones so subtle yet so pronounced. This is a fantastic poem. Don't sell yourself short you are very talented

I truly envy those capable of writing out words of positive thinking. This was by far my favorite stanza. "Curse not the day you first saw the light of day." Because some days we feels more blessed

I couldn't agree more. Wish the neorotypicals understood lol I just look lazy. Spring feels so far, I feel that too. I live in michigan where it'll be below freezing for months then suddenly its 70° and

Advanced group, you really think so? That's an amazing compliment, thank you (: I actually wrote the numbers during a sleepless night, weighing out the rest of my life. I'm glad I could turn my depression

That's so neat (: I actually thought this poem lacked a certain type of rythm. Like I threw in one too many words somewhere but I couldn't pin point it. I'm very relieved to know I don't come off too Dr.

Doesn't it though? The only time I feel I can breathe is at the start of spring and the middle of fall. That's such a tiny window. It's pretty pathetic when you think about how many people live in miserable

Thank you so much!((: and thank you for creating this challenge I know I'll learn alot along the way. Advanced. Wow! Thank you!

This is amazing it reminds me of the band Rise Against. Not sure if you've ever heard of them before but most of their songs are poems with war style metaphors. "Autumn leaves in summer heat trip