Thank you so much, I will post more here and become more active. I love writing poetry.

Sammy is really brave and clear headed. I wonder why Tracy didn't turn up. You leave your readers wondering what that evil thing was and what his plans where. Nice way of keeping the attention. Good read.

Thank you @ubani1 For someone as shy as Sally this may seem like being stripped. Thank you for your words of encouragement.

Thank you so much @jayna, your feedback is so encouraging. I will be writing more often and hoping to learn more from writing here.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I the love the way you see into the heart of this story and the elements of the story @gracielaacevedo

Walls have eyes indeed. Thank you for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.

Beautifully explained, it is indeed hard to translate poetry from one language to another let alone haiku. Love the haiku you quoted.

Pain is the signal that things are not right. Pain concealed is a bomb waiting to explode. Pain expressed helps water it down, Pain so deep makes the soul numb. Pain is a festering wound that can't be

Isn't perception a product of personal experience? Dreams without actions to back them are a waste of time, but it is dreamers who are the source of inventions and beauty. Thanks for stopping by.

Thank you so much @inkwell for your support. mention and reward. I appreciate it very much.

Thank you @wrestlingdesires. I'll read your story too. I am so stuck with chores offline.

Thank you.

I've never tried to make this with sweetcorn, We usually make it with tapioca pearls and wheat noodles or even jackfruit.

Thank you very much. I haven't tried writing stories of this kind before.

The bravado of this guy to take on a salamander for money is the story of many a drunk or addict. Finally our hero was saved by a woman. This is based on some kind of game you play? I am curious He is

Thanks for taking to the time to read and give me some feedback. So appreciate this.

Thank you @jayna for your feedback. I appreciate the warm welcome.

Tragic, really. Drunken driving mixed with elation as a result of finding love. Two heady combinations leading to the tragedy. Didn't expect the ending though.

Glad it didn't leave you as confused as when you started it. 😁 Yes, you nailed it.

Sure will do. Thanks for your response